“Already?”
He nodded. “Good recommendations. She’ll come tomorrow so you can meet her.”
I wanted to ask more, but the doorbell rang.
He looked up, frowning slightly. “Who’s that?”
I sighed. “Let’s take a wild guess.”
When I opened the door, my suspicion was confirmed.
Linda stood there, holding a pie dish wrapped in foil like it was a gift from heaven. “I brought you something sweet,” she said. “My poor son must be starving.”
“Good evening to you too,” I replied.
“We’ve eaten.”
“Really?” she said, stepping into the kitchen uninvited. “Because the last time I saw David, he’d lost weight. You should feed him better.”
She placed the pie on the counter, wiped her hand along the table, and examined her fingers.
“Dusty,” she declared. “We’re getting a new housemaid tomorrow,” I said. “Housemaid,” she repeated, shaking her head.
“You can’t pick up a rag yourself?”
“It’s been a long week,” I muttered. “When I was your age, I worked, cooked, and cleaned. And look at me, still standing.”
“It’s late, Linda.
We were about to relax.”
“No respect for elders. That’s what’s wrong with your generation.”
At that moment, David walked in. “Mom, what are you doing here?”
“I came to feed my son.
You looked pale.”
“I’m fine,” he said. “Really.”
“He only says that because you’re standing here,” she said, glaring at me. “Mom, please.
Go home. We’re fine.”
Her lips pursed, but she grabbed her bag. “You’ll regret it when you’re sick,” she said and walked to the door.
When it finally closed behind her, David said, “I’m sorry,” wrapping an arm around me. “I’ll install motion sensors that spray water when she walks in.”
“Please don’t give her a reason to sue us.”
He grinned. “You have to admit, it’d be satisfying.”
“Maybe a little,” I said, smiling for real this time.
I didn’t know then that the next morning would bring someone far more dangerous into our home. The next afternoon, I left work early. Ethan’s school was just a few blocks away, and as I watched him run toward me with his backpack bouncing, I thought how nice it would be to spend the evening without rushing anywhere.
David had said the new housemaid was starting today, and I wanted to see her with my own eyes. When we got home, the smell of something savory hit me. I followed the sound of soft humming into the kitchen.
A young woman stood by the stove, stirring something in a cast-iron skillet. Her blond hair was tied into a neat ponytail, her posture calm and confident. She turned when she heard me.
“You must be Claire,” she said. “I’m Sophie.”
“Yes, welcome, Sophie. It smells amazing in here.
What are you cooking?”
“Shepherd’s pie,” she said easily. “Thought it’d be something hearty after a long day.”
“Shepherd’s pie?” I repeated. “That’s my husband’s favorite dish.”
“Oh really?” Sophie asked, surprised.
“What a coincidence.”
“Yeah,” I said slowly. “Quite a coincidence.”
She smiled again and turned back to the stove as if nothing about this conversation was strange. That evening, when David came home, the scent of the pie filled the house.
“Wow,” he said, grinning. “Shepherd’s pie. That smells exactly like Mom’s recipe.”
“Yeah,” I said evenly.
“Sophie made it.”
He nodded. “She’s good, isn’t she?”
“Apparently,” I said. “Where did you find her again?”
“I told you, through coworkers,” he said, taking a bite.
“She’s young,” I said, crossing my arms. “And she already knows what you like.”
He smiled faintly. “Claire, you’re overthinking.
She just got lucky with the recipe.”
I wanted to believe him. I really did. But something about Sophie didn’t sit right with me.
The way she moved around the kitchen as if she already knew where everything was, the way she folded towels the same way David did, the same soft scent of cedarwood he preferred in his laundry detergent—it all felt too deliberate. Days passed, and my unease only grew. Sophie seemed to know everything about David, his favorite coffee brand, his dislike for onions, even the fact that he preferred the house slightly colder at night.
She’d anticipate his needs before he spoke, and he’d smile at her, unaware of how much that smile twisted inside me. One evening, I found Sophie in the kitchen, finishing the dishes. “Sophie,” I said.
“Can I ask you something?”
“Of course.”
“How do you know so much about my husband?”
“I’m not sure I do.”
“Oh, you do,” I said. “You cook his favorite food, use his favorite products, fold things exactly how he likes them. You even know what upsets his stomach.”
Sophie’s expression stayed calm.
“I do this in every house I work in. I notice patterns, habits. It’s my job.”
“I’ll pay you for the truth if I have to.”
Her eyes widened.
“Excuse me?”
“I mean it,” I said. “A full month’s pay. Just tell me the truth.”
“I am telling the truth,” she said.
“This conversation is making me uncomfortable.”
For a moment, we just stood there, then she grabbed her bag and said quietly, “I’ll see myself out. Have a good evening.”
I told myself I was being paranoid, that I’d let Linda’s constant comments about “keeping your man interested” get into my head. But the coincidences were too precise, too calculated.
Sophie wasn’t just a good worker, she was performing familiarity, piece by piece, as if she were trying to become someone David already liked. The next morning, Sophie arrived early, just as I was finishing breakfast with Ethan. After clearing the dishes, she turned to me and said she might need to leave earlier today.
“I have an appointment,” she explained, “but I can come another day to finish the rest.”
“That’s fine,” I said. “We’ll manage.”
After David left for work, he texted that he’d be staying late. It all felt too perfectly timed — David working late, Sophie leaving early — like they had planned it together.
When Sophie finally walked out, I grabbed my keys and followed her car from a distance. At first, she drove toward the direction of David’s office, and my chest began to ache with dread. But then she turned again, and the streets grew quieter, more familiar in a way that made my throat go dry.
It wasn’t his office she was heading to. It was Linda’s neighborhood. When she stopped in front of my MIL’s house, I felt my whole body tense.
My heart thudded against my ribs as I parked two houses away. I stepped out and crept closer until I reached the side fence. The kitchen window was open just a crack, and Linda’s voice drifted out.
“So? How’s it going?”
Sophie sighed. “Nothing’s working.
I’m doing everything you said. Cooking his favorite meals, keeping the house the way he likes it, even dressing up more, but he barely notices me.”
“You’re not trying hard enough,” Linda snapped. “My son just needs a little push.
That woman doesn’t deserve him.”
“He seems to love her.”
“Love,” Linda scoffed. “All men are the same. Give him the right moment, and he’ll forget her fast.”
My hands shook as I pulled out my phone and typed: Come to your mother’s house.
Now. Don’t ask why. It felt like forever before David’s car finally turned the corner.
He spotted me crouched by the fence, confusion flashing across his face. “Claire, what on earth—”
“Shh,” I whispered. “Listen.”
Inside, Linda’s voice grew sharper.
“You need to arrange a dinner when she’s not home. Make him feel special. Men are simple creatures.”
“I don’t think I can.
He’s faithful. You should stop this.”
“You’re not paid to think!” Linda hissed. “Just make it happen.”
David stared at me, disbelief and anger twisting his features.
I stood up. “Let’s end this,” I said quietly. He followed me to the front door, and when I rang the bell, the noise echoed through the house.
When Linda opened the door, her practiced smile froze. Sophie stood behind her, pale as paper. “Well,” David said evenly, “if there’s going to be a dinner, I prefer red wine.
And maybe Thursday—Claire might ‘work late.’”
I crossed my arms. “Yes, Thursday sounds great. You two can have all the time you need to plot.”
“David, it’s not what it sounds like,” Linda stammered.
“I heard everything,” I said. “You hired her to break us apart.”
“I only wanted the best for my son.”
David took a step closer. “I have a wife I love, a son I adore, and a home I’m proud of.
From now on, don’t come to our house, don’t call, and don’t see Ethan until you understand what boundaries mean.”
Linda’s face went ghostly white. “You can’t do this.”
“I just did,” he said. He took my hand, and together we walked out.
The air felt lighter, cleaner. Neither of us spoke until we reached the car. “I’m sorry,” David said quietly.
“Mom was the one who recommended Sophie. I didn’t tell you because I knew it would start a fight.”
“From now on, we will decide together. Always.”
He nodded.
“Deal.”
Tell us what you think about this story, and share it with your friends. It might inspire them and brighten their day.
